7 Posts
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19 Years
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"Tempesta"
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Post by Sofia on Dec 17, 2019 9:55:03 GMT -4
A header post for future use~
[b]Character:[/b] <name>
[b]Starting Prompt:[/b] <describe how you plan to start your saga>
[b]Story Beats:[/b] < EX: I want to get involved in an important medical operation using my skills, and build up coverage of it!>
[b]NPCs Involved:[/b] <Any NPCs existing or not would go here!>
[b]End-Goal:[/b] < What you want to achieve, ex: I want to become famous in the medical field and get the government to notice me! (make sure to make your goals fit with your narrative and skills, you're not going to become a famous surgeon with F-rank medical skill!)
[b]Notables:[/b] As the government and a teacher is involved, I should talk to a mod too!>
[b]Completed Saga:[/b] <Add the link to your saga threads>[/div] |
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7 Posts
EP
EXP
Total
19 Years
Female
"Tempesta"
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Post by Sofia on Dec 17, 2019 10:01:50 GMT -4
Character: Sofia Stefani Starting Prompt: Having arrived in Japan fresh off her exile from Italy, Sofia seeks out her older half-brother Giovanni for a place to stay while she figures out what she will do with her life. Story Beats: Sofia meets with Giovanni at his home. They have a bit of a 'catch up', and Sofia reveals the reason for her being here, perhaps a little reluctantly. With his sister currently without any place to go, Giovanni and the Trapani element in Japan elect to put the girl up, possibly as a future asset for them. Sofia begins a new chapter in her life; the Japan arc. NPCs Involved: Mostly this should be Sofia and Giovanni, though I could potentially see Antonio being involved as well, since he's Gio's right hand man. End-Goal: For Sofia, this mainly acts as a reason for her to stay in Japan, and also establishes her with a place to live. Notables: It shouldn't impact the site wide plot all that much, aside from giving the Trapani syndicate an extra pair of hands should they need them. Completed Saga: <Add the link to your saga threads>
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Post by Esperia on Dec 17, 2019 11:48:07 GMT -4
Hey Sofia,
unfortunately, the way this saga is described would make it not able to stand on its own. Something all sagas have in common is that they serve as a development, consider a saga similar to story arc where you work toward a goal, either short term or long term but divided into several short term goals. Ask yourself the following question:
What will change after she starts to stay with her half brother? In general social objectives can be part of a saga, but actually they are part of a bigger picture.
An example is Tetsuko Shindou's second saga, where she is seeking to meet new people. In a similar way, one could say this is a similar objective to your 'Moving in with her half brother and talking to them', but it is part of a larger picture: to gain people to trust and find the resolve to decide how to approach the matter of her family. The fact she is working toward expanding her social circle of trust and find help to resolve her problems through their support can be considered the 'objective' she is reaching for in this saga.
Basically right now this saga will need more details and a clearer objective of what Sofia hopes to accomplish by staying with Giovanni.
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