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Post by Deleted on Apr 16, 2018 10:10:21 GMT -4
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Hyram Drakar sixteen || Hetrosexual || Male || affiliation
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PERSONALITY
POSITIVE
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Fearless
Caring
Trustworthy
Loyal
Independant
NEGATIVE
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Headstrong
Passionate
Argumentative
Trsuting
Emotional
LIKES
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Ladies
Music
Being funny
Thunder Storms
Food (especially cookies)
DISLIKES
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Spiders
Heights
Villains
Deception
War
PERSONALITY
Hyram is a caring and dedicated young man. Although he plays the goof amongst his friends and comrades he is actually extremely intelligent and hardworking, a man of manners and code due to his upbringing he despises those who violate certain common courtesies such as holding a door for a lady. Due to Hyram's upbringing, he was a very selfish child but as he grew he became much more aware of the world around him with the violence, discord, terror that was going on whilst he sat upon his golden pedestal. Choosing to make a difference in the world compared to sitting back and letting others do the hard work he chose to apply to UA Academy. A man of many, many words he rarely shuts up and much prefers to drone on for ages about the most random of topics which can become somewhat annoying but within his mumblings, he does actually come out with some sense and reason. Although he has no idea, he is actually a quite good-looking young man and has had several admirers but can never catch on the fact that they are flirting with him much to the annoyance of his friends.
| APPEARANCE HEIGHT: 1.72 Metres
WEIGHT: 63.5 Kilos
HAIR/STYLE: BLonde and scrufft at shoulder length
SKIN/SCARS: Pale skin, lightning bolt on his right pectoral
EYES: Purple full eyes
NOTABLES: Lightning blonde hair, cheeky smile and piercing purple eyes.
Hyram tends to stick to a fitted, navy blue school jacket with a yellow round neck, short sleeve t-shirt underneath his jacket embelished with a lightning bolt on the back. His trousers are a black or charcoal mix, slim fitted jean and a pair of All star high tops on his feet. He tends to wear headphones quite a lot due to his love of music, these specific headphones are grey over ear "retro" headphones, grey in colour with a littel flame of each ear muff. HIs hair is lightning blonde and tends to point out in various directions courtesy of his quirk. His eyes are a striking violet but they appear gentle, whilst his smile is often described as cheeky or mischievious. His frame is slim but muscled and well proportioned like an olympic swimmer.... oooooh yeah!
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❛❛I hurt myself to see if I still feel
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HISTORY
Hyram comes from a very well-to-do family whose main business comes through the gun trade. Although this was something he was proud of due to the success of his parents, he lived the life with a silver spoon stuck in his mouth wanting for nothing and generally being that little brat who everyone secretly despised. It was only when his family went out that he suddenly began to see the truth of the world and the destruction which was being wrought with the guns and quirks of others. Hyram began to feel somehow responsible for the pain of those hurt by his families guns and much against his families wishes applied to join Yuuei academy to make a change in the world.
Hyram's quirk revealed itself quite early on in his life and much to the surprise of his parents it did not have anything to do with technology or gunmanship but instead was a variety of fire which he quickly came to name "God spark", a lightning based quirk which was used to cause havoc within the household.
His parents came to turn their back on him given his distaste to the family business, however, they could not risk destroying their bloodline so agreed to pay his tuition fees and lodgings, however, there would be a time when they wanted something in return. Generally speaking Hyram stuck to himself, beleiveing that people knew of his parents misdeeds and therefore beleived they hated him even when this wasn't the case. Often in fights in school and always the first to stand up to the bully Hyram quickly gained a name as a bit of a "bad boy" with a good heart. This initially was a worry during his application to Yuuei as he elieved that although he stodd up to bullies he had done so in the wrong way and could not be taken in due to the belief he "didn't play by the rules". Even with his doubt Hyram was accepted and now is a proud sudent of the Yuuei Academy.
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Meliodas, Izayoi Sakamaki - Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2018 5:20:38 GMT -4
AbilitiesMundane Abilities
Musician
Rank: (Rank of ability)
Effect: Rocks out with his guitar out... and he sings.
Gymnast
Rank: (Rank of ability)
Effect: Capable of contocrting his body when required as well as having great core strength and flexability.
Photogenic memory
Rank: (Rank of ability)
Effect: Hyram is able to recall things from his past much like looking through a scrap book, so faces, places, names, are relatively easy for him to remember.
| Abilities Marksman
Type: Skill
Rank: (Rank of the ability)
Effect: Due ot gowing up in a gun based quirk family he had to become efficient in firearms as well as it being the means to his families wealth. Hyram is capable of working out the trajectory and distance for most shots when required with his lightning. However, he has been known to miss from time to time.
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Olympus Soul
Type: Emitter
Rank: E
Effect: This quirk is lightning based. The user is able to emanate electricity from their body through their hands, feet, etc. The premise being that lightning can only be released by the connection of two bodily parts; EG. The snapping of fingers is the most prefered method, but even something as inventive as scrunching one's toes when kicking would also release a surge of electricity. It is quite normal to see electricity occasionally ripple across the individual's body especially when experiencing strong emotions. The current output of the electricity is just above that of a strong electric fence, the electricity can reach a total of 10 feet from the release point when battling on land, however, if water is involved either fighting within or fighting in a wet or raining environment, the distance increases to 18 feet.
The lighting itself can be straight fired at opponents, as well as having the capability to be moulded to form scruffy nets and expenditures. The connection required to release the lightning does not necessarily be restricted to his own body, for example, a headbutt would suffice. However, depending on the strength of the connection with determining the power of the lightning, eg, a flick would be comparable to an electric fence or a strong static shock but a full-blown smacking of hands the strength of a weak cattle prod (10 milliamperes).
Drawback: Due to the way that the lightning is released it can become quite painful as well as difficult to continually keep snapping fingers and connecting bodily parts. The quirk itself is physically demanding for if you continue to snap your fingers you will eventually begin to cramp, much like knocking knees, elbows, slapping hands etc. Much like a lightning cloud the quirk also has the negative impact if the lightning is not released in some form every couple of hours leading to stomach cramps, headaches, nausea. Hyram's cramps from overuse of his quirk slow him down and even sometimes cause him to collapse from the pain. Thi also increases the chance of misfiring or greatly impairing his aim and ability to be both mobile and effective in battle. If the lightning is not released at all for over 12 hours the individual would pass out and release the energy in one blast, uncontrolled. Due to the lightning needing to be released on a constant basis the user also acts a bit like a walking battery often making people's hair stand on end depending on how much energy he has released of late. This can also be seen in varying ways; the user can charge phones with their pinky touching the port, they can make lights/ electrical appliances flicker depending on emotional state and when the lightning was last released.
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2018 7:35:03 GMT -4
Hello Meliodas and welcome to True Path! Glad to see you making a character here with us.
I'm Arkwright and I'll be taking a look at your application today. First of all your character currently lacks an affiliation, looking at the rest of his profile makes me believe that he's supposed to be a hero so please add that to the top next to his gender. You currently have 4 abilities listed, 3 mundane and 1 combat ability. Characters on True Path start with 2 ability slots that they can use however they wish (1 mundane 1 combat, 2 mundane, 2 combat, or you can just use 1 slot for now as well) so please reduce the overall number of abilities to only two and add the appropriate rank which is F in this case. For your quirk, while it looks good overall I'd like you to scale the effect down from a cattle prod to a simple stun gun for the starting rank. Also remove the drawback of releasing all energy after 12 hours since that can be used to gain an advantage in certain situations. Finally add a thematic drawback something that affects your character in everyday life and modifies their behavior. If you need any help please go ahead and ask and I'll be happy to assist you.
Arkwright
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