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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2018 13:28:01 GMT -4
 | ❛❛ Speed Demon
Pracross Yendatta 16 || bisexual || male || hero
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PERSONALITY
POSITIVE
Energetic
Sympathetic
Perceptive
Charasmatic
Honest
NEGATIVE
Childish
Short Sighted
Petty
Aggressive
Emotional
LIKES
Fighting
Gaming
Eating
Animals
The Sounds of Nature
DISLIKES
Broken Promises
Liars
Being Ignored
Seeing a Hurt Friend
Being Denied
PERSONALITY
Pracross tends to be a quick analyzer, picking up patterns often and getting things down. His general atmosphere is a kind approach, attempting to make friends a little too often. He's often gullible and easy to bring down.
| APPEARANCE HEIGHT: 1.39m
WEIGHT: 73.4kg
HAIR/STYLE: Messy, Black
SKIN/SCARS: Pale
EYES: Dark blue, tired
NOTABLES: N/A
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❛❛Someone once told me that there's nothing to be afraid of. No matter the hardships, there's always a good outcome, you just have to work yourself to do it.
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HISTORY Pracross comes from a long line of fighters. Whether those fighters were police, superheroes or military fighters, they all stood with a fist at the ready. Pracross is no variation of this legacy. As a child, he often looked up to the other super powered kids and the popular heroes of the world. Seeing heroes set him into a hype to be a hero, just like his lineage, and while most of them worked for money, Pracross simply wanted to help people, as a result of an incident years ago. Pracross' mother was struck dead right before his eyes, unable to stop the killer before the set the woman into an incurable coma through their quirk.
Once her reached the age of his quirk, Pracross was surprised to see that his power could be beneficial to his hero status. With the powers of wind, he could pick up heavy object, move swiftly, and jump high, three simple qualities that he took to heart with the mind set of becoming a hero. Passing through school at an A-B level, Pracross followed the idea of joining the hero academy, using it as inspiration for his goals.
At the age of 13, Pracross met a fellow student who was seeking a training a partner to enhance their skills, and with some discussion, the two became friends. With their quirks, the two inspired each other with ideas on how to use each other's powers. This friend gave Pracross the idea of using his quirk for increasing his speed and weight for easy maneuverability. Taking this advice, he used the idea and settled to use it.
Finally hitting the age for the exams, Pracross immediately applied with a big smile at the ready. Earning a score of 32 Villlain, 21 Rescue, Pracross was accepted. Now, with his first year in bound, he prepares for his classes. |
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Post by Deleted on May 13, 2018 5:17:40 GMT -4
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Martial Arts
Rank: F
Effect: After training under a mentor, Pracoss has learned the skills of hand to hand combat.
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| Abilities Enhance Acrobatics
Type: Enhancement
Rank: F
Effect: Using his quirk to boost his abilities, Pracross is able to run with incredible speed and incredible jumping abilities.
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Boreas' Blessing
Type: Emitter
Rank: E
Effect: Boreas' Blessing is the manipulation of wind. By bringing forth wind, Pracross is able to use it as he wishes. He can move objects of with different speeds, call forth tornadoes with spirals of wind, use it to push himself forward at great speeds, and leap up whole buildings. Since it just wind, it, by itself, can not hurt anyone unless used at high speeds, so it requires environmental assistance, which generally works out in his favor.
Drawback: As to be expected from an emitter, it gives a stat of fatigue. Using the blessing at a small amount is fine and leaves little to no effect on Pracross, but if used at high interevals, it can leave quite a mark on him. By using the power at a very high amount, his body starts to shake. At first it's barely noticeable, just something that pops up minorly. If used for a extended period, his shakes with get so bad that it forces him into a state of a minor spasm. His breathing slows, his movement is hindered, and he gets light headed. If he fights the quirk past that, his body just gives out, knocking him out cold.
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513 Posts
1312 EP
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"best worst staff member"
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Post by Darren Blanco II on May 13, 2018 10:20:53 GMT -4
Hi there and welcome to True Path!
Unfortunately, a lot is wrong with your application. For example, this is an AU story, so mentions to Endeavor and other BNHA characters are a no-go. Parts of the story also directly contradicts elements of the setting. I invite you to fully read the rules and history of the RP; all you need to correct your app is in there.
Good luck!
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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2018 19:41:40 GMT -4
Sorry for taking so long to get back to you. I removed mention of the heroes, I'll need some more guidance if you would like to point some things out. You said there was a lot wrong, so point them out and I'll get to all of them.
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