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Post by Deleted on May 8, 2018 4:40:46 GMT -4
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Pat Jagaimo
14 || Heterosexual || Male || Hero
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PERSONALITY
POSITIVE
✔ Hardworking, Energetic, Fearless, Optimistic, Innocent
NEGATIVE
✖ Reserved, Clumsy, Naive, Lacks Common Sense, Easily Distracted
LIKES
✔ Potatoes, Weapons, Food, Heroes
DISLIKES
✖ Potato Haters, Tomatoes
PERSONALITY
Pat is a simple kid. If you're a good person who enjoys good potatoes, you're his good friend. That's about it.
| APPEARANCE HEIGHT: 1.70m
WEIGHT: 56kg
HAIR/STYLE: Mo has wavy, blonde hair. It's usually kept messy due to not seeing a reason to groom or do anything to it.
SKIN/SCARS: Pat has light skin.
EYES: Pat has big, magenta eyes filled with energy and motivation.
NOTABLES: One can usually see Pat with a backpack no matter where he goes.
Pat's appearance in general screams out "youth". His personality and appearance seem to align so well.
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❛❛ Stop going on about effort... It's making my skin crawl...
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HISTORY
Pat was just a happy child with a happy life. He had parents, an older brother named Tap, and a dog named Tappat. The Jagaimos lived quite a normal life on their potato farm, and it would've been quite successful if it had kept going. However Fate decided that all things come to an end, and for Pat's family, it ended quite early compared to many other normal, happy children's families. At age 13, Pat witnessed a gory scene of his whole family being cut into pieces in front of his two eyes by a mysterious masked man. The man's last words before he burned down the whole farm were "These potatoes are useless. Just like your family."
Pat was homeschooled at the time. So when a government official took Pat in as his own child, he spent his time doing his best trying to adjust Pat into a regular life but in the city. Nothing worked however. The man almost didn't know what to do until he remembered that Pat was raised in a potato farm. The official brought a potato to Pat to see how the young lad would react. Fortunately, the results of presenting a potato to the kid were positive. Pat was finally willing to open up to this man and reveal his true self. Due to his past experiences, this would be the only time that Pat would sincerely express his emotions to others.
When he turned 14, the government thought that it would be a good idea to bring Pat to U.A Highschool due to his quirk's enormous potential of being something more. Pat agreed, believing that there are many people including himself that could become a hero to others just like how the man did for him. He wished to bring justice for his potatoes too of course...
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Momo, Nagisa Hazuki - Free!
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2018 16:13:16 GMT -4
AbilitiesMundane Abilities
Cooking
Rank: F
Effect: Pat has become quite the skilled cook due to being raised in a potato farm.
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Ready & Fire! Type: Transformation
Rank: E
Effect: at can transform himself or parts of himself (arms, legs, shoulders, etc.) into many different types of fire arms. He is also able control the movements of such gun-like weapons when fired from both hands at high speeds, displaying a huge amount of destructive power. Most of his projectiles are created from his blood that solidifies into a metal as strong as a bullet.
Drawback: Pat can use up to 1 L of his blood in one fight before he starts to feel dizziness. Pat can also not yet able to utilize any part of his body yet except for his arms and head due to the lack of experience of using his quirk. Furthermore, the larger the weapon the harder it is for Pat to move around. Which is why Pat carries a sack of potatoes in his backpack quite often.
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Post by Deleted on May 10, 2018 10:42:51 GMT -4
Hiya Momo, and welcome to True Path! I've looked over your app and there's several things we need to square away before we can think of approving you: - Your abilities. As it stands, you have only one now but you're allowed to have two at rank F.
- Right so your quirk is very vague, which is not necessarily a bad thing but we need at least some description to be able to gouge how powerful it is. First of all I'd like to see some description on what type of guns he can use.
- What do you mean by 'control the movements'? He can curve bullets? Some clarification there would be appreciated.
- 'High speeds' and 'huge amount of destructive power' aren't really helpful. I'd like to see some numbers and comparisons. Keep in mind the power level appropriate for a rank E quirk. I'd suggest looking at the rules and some of the approved apps for reference.
- Metal is a no-go for rank E. Again, I'd suggest looking either at the rules or some of the other apps!
- I'd like some indication on how much usage uses how much blood. For example... how much blood does one clip of a pistol use? Things of that nature.
- Your quirk lacks a thematic drawback. And while the potato thing is pretty funny, that does not qualify.
After you're done with these edits, submit your character into the submission thread again. And if you have any questions, feel free to contact either myself or the staff team and we'll get back to you as soon as we can!
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