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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2019 5:58:47 GMT -4
Hi, sorry to be a pain but you can only claim 1 FC. You can 'use' the other by all means as a representation of your transformation / non transformed self, but you need to decide which of the two is your key claim before i can proceed (I assume you'd claim your normal appearance, BUT you use the hazbin hotel demon for your icon so I wanted to be sure)
Also, this is just a personal gripe, but would it be okay to change the exact wording from her controlling the 'atoms' of her body? Its such a extreme degree of control in my eyes, but I'd be open to discussing this in DMs if there's a specific reason you chose atoms. As a shapeshifter I'd suggest a more 'cellular' level of control.
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2019 16:50:27 GMT -4
Hello Misaka, I'll be looking at your app today! The biggest thing I noticed is that your personality and appearance are not within the word limit. Please up your appearance to 150 or more, and your personality to 200 or more words. Another really small thing is that you don't have a rank for your quirk, please add in that it is E rank. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to contact me or another staff member.
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