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Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2018 8:47:02 GMT -4
As a whole, this thread was pretty good. You all gave clear introductions to your character that let me know who they are on the inside at just a glance. All in all, I enjoyed reading this.
I do have some things to say about a few issues. One, I noticed a few examples of using the same word too many time in one paragraph. Also, the last post also felt a bit disconnected, not that it wasn't well written or interesting. I felt like it should have belonged in a separate thread since Nyke didn't interact with other student's in any way.
EXP Rin: 13 EXP Ryuusei: 13 EXP Maximillian: 11 EXP Yoruhi: 11 EXP Jasmine: 5 EXP Nick: 3 EXP Nyke: 5 EXP
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