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Post by cassandra on Oct 3, 2018 18:03:28 GMT -4
 | ❛❛Sirona: The Pure Blooded❜❜
Cassandra (Cassy) Manji
14 || Pansexual || Genderfluid || Villain
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PERSONALITY
POSITIVE
✔ Caring, Attentive, Loving, Giving, altruistic
NEGATIVE
✖ Shy, Quiet, (Sadistic), (Obsessive), (Smug), (murderous), (manipulative), (erratic), (often hysterical)
LIKES
✔ Helping others, (Dismembering and murdering)*, Caitlyn, healing people, (Fighting) (feeding on organs even if they dont give any benefits like they do for Caitlyn)
DISLIKES
✖ (People that aren't Caitlyn), hurting others, (helping others who are not Caitlyn), (Cassandra)
PERSONALITY
Cassandra is a kind sweet person who is willing to help others regardless of the cost to herself. She is always willing to help and heal others regardless of whether they are good or bad. However when she is unconscious or sleeping, Cassandra's latent quirk triggers and forces the other person within her to take over. This other Cassandra who prefers Cassy, is a sadistic and violent person, who has nothing but hatred in their heart. This however has recently changed due to the introduction of Caitlyn into their lives. Cassy has developed a deep fondness for Caitlyn that is reminiscent of a classic yandere, she is willing to do what ever it takes to ensure Caitlyn has food including being willing to murder and dismember in order to provide the meat that her "beloved" so dearly needs.
*comments in () are Sirona
| APPEARANCE HEIGHT: 156cm, (5' 1")
WEIGHT: 49.5kg, (109.1lbs)
HAIR/STYLE: Short hair that is dark brown in color when Cassy is prominent it almost seems a few shades lighter of brown
SKIN/SCARS: Pale white
EYES: Cassandra has golden eyes that shine like crystals, Cassy has bright blood red eyes that never hid the murderous intent in her heart.
NOTABLES: Abnormally sharp and long canines containing a numbing agent allowing for painless or stealth feeding that is dispersed by Cassandras saliva or by time 1-post
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❛❛You are Filled With Determination❜❜
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HISTORY A sweet child
Cassandra was born to a small family consisting of Her mother, an absentee father, and a little sister who was gravely ill often. Cassandra spent much of her life caring for her sister particularly when their mother was not home. Often she would miss spending time with friends outside to take care of her out of her own choice. The girls were often cared well for as their mother worked two jobs plus odd errands whenever she could to make ends meet and gave them as much love and affection as she could between shifts. While it was a hard life it was a life Cassandra enjoyed, she had people to love and care for who loved her back. That was, until she started kindergarten.
Black sheep come home
After a lengthy investigation into an incident with her kindergarten class involving several injured students Cassandra was placed in an asylum claiming she had no knowledge or memory of having committed the crime only that she was scared and would never hurt anyone. in the time following this event Cassandra underwent treatment with teh discovery of a second personality being made and therapy designed to suppress the other personality she was eventually deemed safe to return to society and no longer considered a threat. as such she was released into the custody of her Aunt Caitlyn, a Pro Hero, with the consideration that she would be most effective at keeping her in check should anything occur.
Caitlyn the chocolate giver
Caitlyn took Cassandra in with knowledge of the child's quirk and duality of nature. Along with this information was the revelation that in sealing up her other personality Cassandra also sealed many of her memories of the event resulting in her knowing only that her blood has a healing property for both herself and others and as such is unaware of the entity known as Cassy for differentiation. occasionally however Cassy has been able to slip free of her binds and take over Cassandra but has been unable to access their quirk as the chemicals in chocolate cause them to be suppressed. while the doctors have been unable to convince her to eat it, Caitlyn has been able to coerce Cassy into eating chocolate. Now Cassandra resides with her aunt unaware of the darkness in her but aware that blood and chocolate are mandatory diets for her now to "keep her blood pure".
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Misaka, Frisk and Chara - Undertale
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Post by cassandra on Oct 8, 2018 20:45:55 GMT -4
AbilitiesMundane Abilities
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Medical Intuition
Type: Skill
Rank: F
Effect: To avoid blood loss and the resulting hunger associated with it, Cassandra has developed her medical Knowledge in order to care for others without having to resort to her blood unless absolutely necessary.
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<Mercy or Genocide?>
Type: Mutation
Quirk Rank: E
Effect:
Mercy - Healing Blood - Cassandra is able to, as a preferably last resort, temporarily amplify the healing rate to peak human ability for others when they consume her blood allowing them to heal non-fatal surface injuries over the course of 3 posts these wounds are usually light to medium cuts scrapes and bruises. it is unable to heal any thing more severe than a deep cut with the effect weakening as the blood digests over the course of 3 posts making it most effective out of combat after damage has been received. she can give out a cup full of blood every 10 posts which is enough for one person to benifit without triggering Cassy to awaken
Genocide - Killing Instinct - Cassy when awakened is a being of pure bloodlust, this immense desire to feed results in Cassy having amplified speed on par with an Olympic athlete as she seeks the most efficient way to kill or feed on a target using any means necessary. Due to this any and everyone is a target except for Caitlyn. this lasts until she has fed on someone atleast once but cassy remains in control unless Caitlyn intervenes.
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- Light sensitivity- Cassandra is intolerance of light. Sources such as sunlight, fluorescent light and incandescent light all can cause discomfort, along with a need to squint or close her eyes resulting in her having an almost perpetually tired appearance. excessively bright lights such as a cloudless day or high lumen light sources can cause headaches.
- Purified water- due to her odd body chemistry purified and distilled water cause Cassandra's nervous system to go into over drive resulting in electrical shocks that cause temporary paralysis when doused with the substance.
- Silver- Cassandra is highly allergic to silver, simple contact with the substance can cause rashes and prolonged exposure can result in severe allergic reactions such as anaphylactic shock.
- Hunger- Cassandra unlike her darker counterpart, has an aversion to drinking blood especially from living targets. Normally she can force herself to drink non living blood for minimal nutrients. However, when allowing others to drink her blood it results in a drastic increase in hunger. If she does not feed to sate this hunger from a live target Cassy will forcibly take over in a bloodlust awakening until her desires have been met and her hunger is sated regardless of who may be harmed in her wake with one exception.
-Food- Cassandra cannot receive nutrients from foods but can eat them for the enjoyment and to feel normal (Cassy hates food except for chocolate because for her it is symbolic of Caitlyn)
Thematic Drawback: Lyn - Lyn as someone with a close connection to both Cassandra and Cassy is capable of pulling her out of her bloodlust state with little effort on her part as neither personalities could ever bring themselves to do harm to her for any reason.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2018 16:11:21 GMT -4
Okay so your quirk does way too much. To summarise I believe what you're trying to say is
- you absorb wounds from your allies
- the pain of the wounds becomes beneficial heart orbs
- the orbs have differing qualities, from even FURTHER healing, to inflicting enemies with your wounds, and also creating shield like defences.
Generally the diversity of the quirk is my key issue, and i think the idea of you absorbing wounds from your allies could also use work (though i'll try and talk to the staff team about this further). Right now I'd suggest limiting yourself to a single heart, if any at all, since again even healing your allies is a quirk all its own, the idea of transferring your healing into extra benefits without using other skill slots is somewhat overly-diverse in my personal opinion, though I will be getting a second opinion as this is my first app reviewed as a mod.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2018 13:56:34 GMT -4
> "You talk way to much." Cassandra picks up the shard of metal griping it tight enough it causes her bad to bleed.
... "Bad to bleed"?
Also, it's "loser" not "looser"
> "into teh custody "
The*
Abilities look fine to me.
Smh, not naming it "Determination I would remove the "sub-type" and fighting style, as it can change, and you're only nerfing/limiting yourself into locking into this. Also, fighting styles normally take up an ability slot.
Silver is more of a werewolf thing, but this is fine.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 3, 2018 15:35:29 GMT -4
Hello Misaka,
I'll be the next person helping you with your app. My main concerns are still those shared by Yumi, that your Quirk and abilities do too much. Specifically the Healing aspect of your quirk, and your self-healing ability.
When it comes to your quirk having healing and the ability to transfer poison and disease resistance is just too much. You're going to need to pick one or the other since Mutation Quirks get two advantages, and both of those are considered separate advantages.
The same thing goes for your healing ability: Vampiric Blood. Having both the power to self-heal and gain a strange resistance to previously inflicted wounds is too much for a single F-rank ability. You will need to pick one or the other since you can't have a healing and defensive ability wrapped up under one. With this you need to tone down the healing factor, since 2x the rate of a normal person is beyond what a F-rank ability can do. Being able to completeluy heal a cut or minor injury in the process of a few days is more reasonable than 2x the healing rate of the normal human.
Resolve the issues and post your app up when you are ready. If you have questions or concerns feel free to reach out to me or another staff member at any time.
Thank you,
Identicalcurve.
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Post by DrTentacles on Nov 18, 2018 15:14:39 GMT -4
Hey Misaka,
Hopefully this will be the final round. Your quirk looks much better--I have no major issues with it as written, though I would like to have a multiplayer (doubles healing rates, triples healing rates, ect) on the healing ability, along with an idea of the most severe injuries it can heal. (Cuts, broken bones, organ damage, missing limbs).
You are, however, missing a third ability or mundane, and in your appearance, have a reference to fangs with a "numbing agent." If the fangs have a mechanical impact, they'll need to be an ability.
PM me with any questions!
Thanks,
Doc.
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Post by Kelolon on Nov 27, 2018 15:08:06 GMT -4
Approved~ |
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