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Post by Kazu Fureu on May 3, 2019 19:52:29 GMT -4
ProgressionDiscarded Thoughts (Metal Detachment)
Upgrading From:
New ability
Upgrading to:
Type: Skill
Rank: F
Effect:
Having obtained the power to remove cursed thoughts from himself (actually it was an amused Red trying to remove it by force, causing Kaz to freak out while Red looks a bit surprised), The Chronicler now has the power to expel Metal constructs from his palm.
He can remove Metal constructs from his hand and throw them. He can throw a Metal sword for example without it remaining attached on his palm. The duration of a Metal construct without its connection to the body is 1 post, and all Metal constructs without connection to the body have the durability and properties of wood. All Metal constructs out of Kaz's palm will evaporate. Once expelled, Kaz's body will be forced to create more Metal by using Stamina, leaving Kaz more tired than before. The range he can throw it is the size of a small room
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Post by Dessen on May 5, 2019 1:13:21 GMT -4
Kazu FureuThis looks good! The only thing to add is that, since this is a ranged attack, please state that it hands the F rank range of 5-7 meters or the approximate length of a small room and I'll give it the okay!^_^
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Post by Dessen on May 6, 2019 9:33:28 GMT -4
Kazu Fureu After the appropriate edits have been made, you are: 
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Post by Kazu Fureu on May 21, 2019 11:50:45 GMT -4
ProgressionLower Limits Released (Gymnastics) - Agility Upgrading From:
new ability
Upgrading to:
Type: Enhancement
Rank: F
Effect: In order to improve himself, Kaz has decided to advance his career in the area of gymnastics because...well to be honest he saw something on tv and now he wants to recreate it. He can now move more nimbly on his legs. One time he even tried doing a backflip, and almost properly did it. Now every time he trains, he reattempts to do the backflip again with mixed results (mostly poor). But at least he can now actually move out of the way of things easier.
Summary: agility/coordination to maneuver around nearby obstacles, comparable to someone starting out in gymnastics or a parkour video blogger
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Gonna spend a 100 exp for this skill, also if possible can you change the hero name on my app to Metal Chronicler if possible? |
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Post by Deleted on May 27, 2019 13:30:29 GMT -4
Approved
121 - 100 = 21
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Post by Kazu Fureu on Jun 14, 2019 13:26:57 GMT -4
METAL CHRONICLER QUIRK INFORMATION Quirk
Greedy Metal Type: Emitter Rank: E Description: A solidus (usually in liquid form), almost metal-like substance that oozes out of the lines of Kaz's palms. Amassing into a large blob, Kaz can then form it into a shape he desires, such as a cube, a pyramid, or a long rod. He tends to keep it out in the form of an solidus opened book, with "letters" imprinted onto the "cover" with his Chosen One's name on it whenever he gets serious. Once he moves on to a new chosen one, the name changes and the old one goes in the "pages". When he wants to fight, he shifts it into a blunt weapon or attempts to make it into a sword. This occurs on his right hand. He can grab the 'sword" with his left hand to mold it into a different form. The Name of his current Chosen One is "inscribed" on the side of the weapon form. Benefits He can form a blob of Greedy Metal (the size of a bowling bowl) in his right hand, then can manipulate it with his left hand. He can stabilize it into a basic shape/weapon, and then return to its blob/book form. He can 'modify' the size and length of the weapon to alter its "weight" and "fragility." A short weapon is more stable and blunt, a longer one is more shaper but easier to "break." If it "breaks" during combat it will turn into its liquid state and mass up into its blob form and it must recharge for 1 full post to be solid again. It has the properties of stone. He cannot make anything complex like guns with working mechanics. The length of the longest solid blade he can make is the length of half a normal-sized swimming pool, but any gelatinous formation is the length of a normal sized swimming pool Summary - Can change the state and density of the Metal (Solid to solidus to liquid/Durability)
- Weapon Formation
- Elongation of constructs (Range)
Exhaustion and Weakness: Constant usage tires him out a lot, hence his Sleep Mask. He can't wear gloves or cover up his hands, otherwise he cannot release Greedy Metal. Large amounts of Greedy Metal can build up on the lines and cause severe blisters if not careful. He must focus when forming or reshaping the weapon before it stabilizes, otherwise he'll lose the form. The weapons are all brittle so they run the risk to break easily when attacking actual metal weapons or objects. COMBAT ABILITIES Kendo Swordsmanship / "Chronicle Sword Grace"
Type: Skill
Rank: F
Effect: Is skilled with blunted weapons to defend himself. Anything with an edge scares him a little for fear of hurting himself, plus he hasn't really practiced with edged weapons, but he still tries to use them.
Discarded Thoughts (Metal Detachment)
Type: Skill
Rank: F
Effect: Having obtained the power to remove cursed thoughts from himself (actually it was an amused Red trying to remove it by force, causing Kaz to freak out while Red looks a bit surprised), The Chronicler now has the power to expel Metal constructs from his palm.
He can remove Metal constructs from his hand and throw them. He can throw a Metal sword for example without it remaining attached on his palm. The duration of a Metal construct without its connection to the body is 1 post, and all Metal constructs without connection to the body have the durability and properties of wood. All Metal constructs out of Kaz's palm will evaporate. Once expelled, Kaz's body will be forced to create more Metal by using Stamina, leaving Kaz more tired than before. The range he can throw it is the size of a small room
Lower Limits Released (Gymnastics) - Agility
Type: Enhancement
Rank: F
Effect: In order to improve himself, Kaz has decided to advance his career in the area of gymnastics because...well to be honest he saw something on tv and now he wants to recreate it. He can now move more nimbly on his legs. One time he even tried doing a backflip, and almost properly did it. Now every time he trains, he reattempts to do the backflip again with mixed results (mostly poor). But at least he can now actually move out of the way of things easier.
Summary: agility/coordination to maneuver around nearby obstacles, comparable to someone starting out in gymnastics or a parkour video blogger
SPECIALIST ABILITIES Ability name
Rank: (Rank of ability)
Effect: (Effect of ability)
Ability name
Rank: (Rank of ability)
Effect: (Effect of ability)
LIFE SKILLS Sewing/"Divine Thread Manipulation no.14: Alexander"
Rank: F
Effect: (Can sew patches onto clothes and fix up small rips on items and reattach limbs on small dolls. He uses this to repair any small damage his coat has received.
Ability name
Rank: (Rank of the ability)
Effect: (The effect of your ability)
So Im finally clarifying Kaz's quirk benefits and adding in the Specialist section. Since Sewing is now a lifeskill, that should be a 50 exp refund or did I get that wrong?
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Post by Kazu Fureu on Jun 14, 2019 13:53:39 GMT -4
KAZU "KAZ" FUREU BASIC INFORMATION Hero/Vigilante/Villain alias: Metal Chronicler
Player Name: Souta
Faceclaim/Series: Sougo Okita from Gintama
Age: 16
Gender: M
Affiliation: Student
Height: 1.7 m
Weight: 55 kg
Hair/Style: Dark Brown, wavy
Skin/Scars: light skin, weird lines on right hand palm and one line across his left palm
Eyes: Brownish, has small bags underneath
Notables: Has an ascot on all of the time, carries along a "book" with a "pen," writing down anything he sees claiming to be the chronicler of this era (he carries his diary with him all the time.)
APPEARANCE AND PERSONALITY Appearance:
A lean teenager with brown hair, he tends to keep his hair down and not style it. He presents the image of a wealthy man, with a nice coat and an ascot. This appearance is betrayed by the reoccurring sleep mask with eyes drawn on he wears whenever he feels sleepy. He is seen with a small fancy satchel containing string, needles, bag of erasers, and two books. He wears this instead of his usual school uniform, having his mom or sister teach him how to sew the school patch onto his satchel when he was young.
His casual outfit is that he leaves the ascot on but puts on a more casual coat on. He refuses to take off the ascot except when he's near the water, which has caused trouble for him whenever he does PE.
His desired hero outfit is a black vest, an ascot slash scarf hybird and a royal looking long coat (he wants black with gold highlights, White or Gray are acceptable as well, but as long as it looks fancy and cool he doesn't mind the color) with a fancy phantom thieve mask version of his sleep mask, with a fancy hat. He has a special pocket for his book.
Once in a blue moon he'll wear normal clothes like normal shirts and hoodies.
POSITIVE
Intelligent
Strategic
Ambitious
Bombastic
Friendly
Creative
NEGATIVE
Obsessive
Naive
Prideful
Forgetful
Bombastic
Easily Distracted
Nervous
LIKES
Books
Reading to people
Skillful people
His "chosen one" of the month
His family
Sleeping
The Future
Sewing
Bird Watching
Tokusatsu
Acting
DISLIKES
Caffeine at night
His "Chosen One"'s dislikes and enemies/rivals
The "pathetic loser" of the month
His Mo-I mean, People who say your ideals are wrong
Bitter tasting things
Comics
Personality:
Kaz is a prideful and conceited young man who places himself above all other people he deems "unworthy." The criteria that he judges on changes erratically, however, so someone that he deems unworthy of can quickly become his friend or even his "chosen one" a month later. He tends to doze off in order to ignore them, or whenever he feels tired.
Whenever he sees someone do an extradorinaiy action, or if the person fits any of his criteria, Kaz becomes obsessed with them and treats himself as their follower or scribe. He writes down any event that occurs to them and tries his best to aid them in whatever they need. Most of the time the "chosen one" don't like this because Kaz becomes more dramatic and tends to loudly announce to the world the glory that is his "chosen one."
He's not all useless, however. He's skilled with his quirk and in combat, but the main reason why people put up with him is he can come up with good plans and can adjust them on the fly. He prides himself on his intelligence, however, so that means any time someone proves him wrong he just gets frustrated and covers his face with his book, with muffled screams heard.
He loves to chronicle everything. He has two books, an average diary that he uses as a diary but treats it as a scroll of the earth's knowledge, and a metal covered book for his chosen ones. The metal book is useless for recording things since he has started running out of pages for it, so when people aren't looking he just snaps a picture of the end result with his phone/quickly jolts it down on note paper, and grabs a big eraser to erase it all.
HE LOVES PRAISING AND GIVING DRAMATIC NARRATIONS. He will not let anyone forget this.
Of course that's the 'Chronicler' character. Kazu is a nervous guy who just wants to entertain people. He has an odd way of doing it, though. HISTORY "REJOICE! You have been blessed to hear the story of the new Chronicler of the current era! His name is Kazu Fureu, and he shall write down the tales of the Chosen Ones!"
"Born to a Chinese-Japanese family of 4, he and his sister were abandoned by their father, losing him to illness. In order to support her children, his spouse Shizu Omai-Fureu worked in a small foreign gimmick restaurant: O'brien's Bar. It was an odd location where several odd looking fellows met and talked with. As she had no one to take care of her younglings, she took the two along with her, not knowing that this humble beginning shall birth the world's chronicler.*"
"Around the age of 4 Kaz obtained his quirk, manipulating liquid metal pouring out of his hands. He first noticed this when playing with his first idol, a small toy car. Metal looking slime poured out of his palms, shifted in odd, mysterious forms, and a large blob formed on his hand. In an instant he realized what he was capable of!** New possibilities have opened up for the young ordinary boy, not knowing his path was set in stone the minute he met...him."
"His name was lost in time, but his skills and personality will never be forgotten. He claimed to be a hero, showing off his water quirk to the bar customers. He was wise, he spoke with a silver tongue, and he taught Kaz the importance of one's power. He beamed confidence across the room, and as if it was fate, the young Kaz realized that he was what he read in a book. He was the 'chosen one.' And so, he has followed and copied his every action, and often talked great of him to spread his reputation.*** Sadly, this will not last, as the man mysteriously disappeared one day. The young boy was devastated. How can his chosen one leave him like this? It was unheard of!"
"Luckily, the next day someone new came in the bar. She was wise, she spoke with a silver tongue, and she taught Kaz the importance of one's power. Kaz was in awe. The next week she left however, leaving the young boy in despair. Abandoned by two chosen ones?! How could this be! Luckily, a new person came in the next week."
"Fast forward one year later. After a while, the young ordinary man realized something. All these people, all these special chosen ones?! How will anyone know their name if they keep disappearing!? These chosen ones are outnumbered by all the other nobodies of the world, and if there's nothing left of them, how can anyone know their brilliance. And so, the true purpose of the young man was revealed to him! He MUST record them! He MUST immortalize their legacies! With a mysterious book granted to him from unknown sources****, he went off and recorded their presences, keeping them in his heart and in the world's mind."
"Alas the grade school he went to did not understand him. At the ripe age of 9, they mocked me-him for being in such poor parlor, mockingly providing aid and such. Determined to drive these fools away, he searched for something to make his presence known, to make them realize who the chronicler of the world is. At a bazaar of fortunes*****, he found it! A white ascot wrapped around a plastic head! Such brilliant fabric, such silky texture! He must have it! As if it was written, his chronicler's costum-regalia was born."
"However, he realized another problem. If he were to aid his chosen one...how would he do so? He can only do so much with his power to change into small spheres of devastation. That's when he found it. The new birthplace of the Chronicler's impeccable skill with the blade. A kendo dojo. Enrolling under the disguise of "fun," he honed his skills nonstop. As it had turned out, he had a sort of gift with the blade, able to fight off the sensei's top student to a standstill******. His affinity with blades grew, and at night he practiced nonstop, in order to properly hone his skills as his chosen one's follower and protector! It grew to the point where he can form blades almost out of thin air!*******"
"Now in this current age of heroism, the chosen ones appear to be swarming under a specific area: Japan. Under the grace of the world, The chronicler adopted his new name: Metal O'brien...no wait...Metal Chronicler! And with it, shall write down the page of a new history!********"
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These are edits that his sister, Hanemi would like you to know about him:
*It was literally a pub with some weird foreign aesthetic, our mother needed the money and it was next to a daycare actually.
** He freaked out and we had to calm him down by saying he had a quirk. I didn't get one sadly, but I suppose it was for the best since I didn't get a big ego like he did.
***He saw a live action show with special effects. He's very impressionable
**** I got him his diary. Mom said it was encouraging him, but screw that.
*****Bazaar, seriously? It was a costume store, dumbass!
****** Okay fine, he is really good with a kendo sword. He still had to practice nonstop however
******* He kept changing his liquid quirk into swords nonstop for like a week.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2019 18:26:58 GMT -4
262 exp after approval
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Post by Kazu Fureu on Jun 18, 2019 17:00:23 GMT -4
Kendo Swordsmanship / "Chronicle Sword Grace"
Rank: F
Effect: Is skilled with blunted weapons to defend himself. Anything with an edge scares him a little for fear of hurting himself, plus he hasn't really practiced with edged weapons, but he still tries to use them.
Metal Mutli-Form Familiarity/ "Chronicle Sword Grace"
Rank: F
Effect: Is skilled and more abled to fight with the constructs created by his Quirk (i.e swords, whips, other shapes) Anything real with an edge scares him a little for fear of hurting himself, plus he hasn't really practiced with real edged weapons. Doesn't really apply when he uses Metal. He's been lax with his kendo training, as a side effect, and isn't really great with using an actual weapon that isn't his Metal.
So i decided to rework an available skill due to this whole update talk, with some back and forward with a staff member to see if its possible. |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2019 18:49:44 GMT -4
Approving the rework of this skill
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Post by Kazu Fureu on Jun 20, 2019 14:53:57 GMT -4
Greedy Metal
Rank: E
Effect: (A solidus (usually in liquid form), almost metal-like substance that oozes out of the lines of Kaz's palms. Amassing into a large blob, Kaz can then form it into a shape he desires, such as a cube, a pyramid, or a long rod. He tends to keep it out in the form of an solidus opened book, with "letters" imprinted onto the "cover" with his Chosen One's name on it whenever he gets serious. Once he moves on to a new chosen one, the name changes and the old one goes in the "pages". When he wants to fight, he shifts it into a blunt weapon or attempts to make it into a sword. This occurs on his right hand. He can grab the 'sword" with his left hand to mold it into a different form.
The Name of his current Chosen One is "inscribed" on the side of the weapon form.
Benefits: He can form a blob of Greedy Metal (the size of a bowling bowl) in his right hand, then can manipulate it with his left hand. He can stabilize it into a basic shape/weapon, and then return to its blob/book form. He can 'modify' the size and length of the weapon to alter its "weight" and "fragility." A short weapon is more stable and blunt, a longer one is more shaper but easier to "break." If it "breaks" during combat it will turn into its liquid state and mass up into its blob form and it must recharge for 1 full post to be solid again. It has the properties of stone. He cannot make anything complex like guns with working mechanics.
The length of the longest solid blade he can make is the length of half a normal-sized swimming pool, but any gelatinous formation is the length of a normal sized swimming pool
Summary:
1) Can change the state and density of the Metal (Solid to solidus to liquid/Durability)
2) Weapon Formation
3) Elongation of constructs (Range)
Exhaustion and Weakness: Constant usage tires him out a lot, hence his Sleep Mask. He can't wear gloves or cover up his hands, otherwise he cannot release Greedy Metal. Large amounts of Greedy Metal can build up on the lines and cause severe blisters if not careful. He must focus when forming or reshaping the weapon before it stabilizes, otherwise he'll lose the form. The weapons are all brittle so they run the risk to break easily when attacking actual metal weapons or objects.
Greedier Metal
Rank: D
Effect: Within Kaz's body is a weird sort of substance separate from his usual systems. Think of it as a sort of second circulatory system. In combat it manifests as a solidus (usually in liquid form), almost metal-like substance that oozes out of the lines of Kaz's palms. Amassing into a large blob, Kaz can then form it into a shape he desires, such as a cube, a pyramid, or a long rod. He tends to keep it out in the form of an solidus opened book, with "letters" imprinted onto the "cover" with his Chosen One's name on it whenever he gets serious. Once he moves on to a new chosen one, the name changes and the old one goes in the "pages". When he wants to fight, he shifts it into a blunt weapon or attempts to make it into a sword. This occurs on his right hand. He can grab the 'sword" with his left hand to mold it into a different form.
The Name of his current Chosen One is "inscribed" on the side of the weapon form.
For some reason he feels heavier at random points after solidizing his Metal.
Benefits: He can form a blob of Metal (the size of a bowling bowl, can increase to two if he likes.) in his right hand, then can manipulate it with his left hand. He can stabilize it into a basic shape/weapon, and then return to its blob/book form. He can 'modify' the size and length of the weapon to alter its "weight" and "fragility." A short weapon is more stable and blunt, a longer one is more shaper but easier to "break." If it "breaks" during combat it will turn into its liquid state and mass up into its blob form and it must recharge for 1 full post to be solid again. It has the properties of Bronze. He cannot make anything complex like guns with working mechanics.
The length of the longest solid blade he can make is the length of half a school bus, but any gelatinous formation is the length of a school bus.
Summary:
1) Can change the state and density of the Metal (Solid to solidus to liquid/Durability)
2) Weapon Formation
3) Elongation of constructs (Range)
Exhaustion and Weakness: Constant usage tires him out a lot, hence his Sleep Mask. He can't wear gloves or cover up his hands, otherwise he cannot release Greedier Metal. Large amounts of Greedier Metal can build up on the lines and cause severe blisters if not careful. He must focus when forming or reshaping the weapon before it stabilizes, otherwise he'll lose the form. The weapons are all brittle so they run the risk to break easily when attacking actual metal weapons or objects.
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Post by Kazu Fureu on Jul 12, 2019 13:08:27 GMT -4
Yall ready for this?
Metal Mutli-Form Familiarity/ "Chronicle Sword Grace"
Rank: F
Effect: Is skilled and more abled to fight with the constructs created by his Quirk (i.e swords, whips, other shapes) Anything real with an edge scares him a little for fear of hurting himself, plus he hasn't really practiced with real edged weapons. Doesn't really apply when he uses Metal. He's been lax with his kendo training, as a side effect, and isn't really great with using an actual weapon that isn't his Metal.
Metal Mutli-Form Mastery/ "Chronicle Sword Grace"
Rank: E
Effect: Is well-honed and trained with the constructs created by his Quirk (i.e swords, whips, other shapes). It's now second nature to him, but he still has far to go. Anything real with an edge somewhat scares him a little for fear of hurting himself. That fear doesn't really apply when he uses Metal. He's been lax with his kendo training, as a side effect, and isn't really great with using an actual weapon that isn't his Metal.
200 Exp to rank up that skill, and allllllssooooooo...
Paradoxical Being (Stamina)
Rank: F
Effect: The state of Kaz is an odd one. Due to his experiences in UA, he has now gathered more energy to do more stuff. In other words, he has more stamina now. That's the good news. The bad news is he has more stamina to waste now. That's not good for him as he lies on the ground snoring after doing something dangerous and energy-wasting.
100 exp for a new combat skill, AND ALSO:
Acting/People Impressions
Rank: F
Effect: "No trust me, I can act alright. No seriously, why are you guys walking away? Red? Shouko? Isaac?"
There has to be some reason as to why he keeps pushing the idea of the "Chronicler" constantly. Turns out that...yeah he can kinda act. After all, he does want to be an actor-slash-hero ideally. To be able to act on stage and on tv, while also acting on the battleground saving people. He's still learning, but he's getting there. He's been in some community plays. However, the main usage of this skill is to be able to act (or at least do impressions of) as different people and personas. Adopting to the best of his ability (which is still community play level so expect some poor impressions) other people's personality traits, he can try to pull this off in the middle of battle to give him a pysch up or confuse people, as well as adopt some of their habits.
Basically, imagine fighting him only to see him start talking in a mix between a decent and horrible posh accent and adopting Red's speech patterns and habits.
100 for a specialist skill. There we go, all that exp, gone. At the time of writing, I have 406 exp. after this...6 exp. *update: made changes to acting to make it more of a specialist skill. |
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