Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2018 11:27:55 GMT -4
+19 Amadeus
+17 Veronica
Overall the threads pacing is a little strange. Going from enemies introduced in a single post, to disarming with the promise of money, to treating the assassin with disdain, like a trusted lackey. Not quite sure what, but something feels off.
Another thing thats off is your posting template, Epsi-Pepsi. It's incredibly hard to read.
+17 Veronica
Overall the threads pacing is a little strange. Going from enemies introduced in a single post, to disarming with the promise of money, to treating the assassin with disdain, like a trusted lackey. Not quite sure what, but something feels off.
Another thing thats off is your posting template, Epsi-Pepsi. It's incredibly hard to read.
