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Post by Jack Orion on Jan 25, 2020 22:28:22 GMT -4
Spending 200 XP to improve Jack's Agility skill!
Draconic Agility
Rank: F
Effect: Through training, Jack’s reflexes, overall acrobatic abilities, including the ability to fly, are improved slightly, allowing him to perform simple but usually difficult maneuvers, (i.e. dodging, flying, parkour, etc).
Draconic Agility
Rank: E
Effect: Due to extra training and stretching exercises, Jack's overall ability to move is improved a rather nice amount compared to many other people. He can move as well as an early-model w aircraft while flying, whilst also being able to outclass the average street performer with foot-based practices. (i.e. dodging, parkour, etc.)
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Post by Webby on Jan 26, 2020 1:53:17 GMT -4
While it's technically fine the way you've written it, I strongly suggest you take a look at the other E rank common combat abilities and see if you can't find a better way to express that you've improved to Rank E. "better compared to before" and "nice amount compared to many other people" is too vague.
Consider move speed:
F rank is akin to a Fitness Instructor
E rank is akin to an Olympic Sprinter! That's a huge jump!
I know that the staff are still working on proper wording for a mobility benefit but take the opportunity to help define it a bit more. If you wanted something simple I'd suggest going for an olympic acrobat.
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Post by Webby on Jan 26, 2020 2:22:09 GMT -4
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"Sirius"
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Post by Jack Orion on Apr 6, 2020 11:44:34 GMT -4
First off, I would like Jack’s current FC on his profile to be changed to this, with this artist credit going to @klainestella on Twitter Secondly, making updates to his overall profile
Hero/Vigilante/Villain alias: Sirius
Player Name: TheInfernoZX
Faceclaim/Series: Custom
Age:16
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Hero
Height: 1.52 Meters
Weight: 59 Kg
Hair/Style: Snow White
Skin/Scars: White, slightly tanned skin, with a scar over his heart.
Eyes: Almond Shaped, Light Purple Eyes
Notables: Medium, fluffy hair, and constantly has a long, white,fluffy fur-rimmed dragon tail, and much sharper than usual teeth. Very young-looking and often confused for someone a couple years younger than he actually is.
Hero/Vigilante/Villain alias: Sirius
Player Name: TheInfernoZX/Sirius
Faceclaim/Series: Custom by @klainestella on Twitter
Age:17
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Hero
Height: 1.52 Meters
Weight: 59 Kg
Hair/Style: Snow White
Skin/Scars: Olive, slightly tanned skin, with a scar over his heart. Covered all over with pure white, pearl-smooth scales.
Eyes: Almond Shaped, Deep Purple Eyes
Notables: Medium, fluffy hair, and constantly has a long, white,fluffy fur-rimmed dragon tail, and much sharper than usual teeth. Also has very large wings sprouting from his back. Very young-looking and often confused for someone a couple years younger than he actually is.
Voice Actor(s): Masako Nozawa (Japanese), Johnny Yong Bosch (English)
Appearance:
Jack is often seen wearing a white hoodie with a furred rim, a red, long-sleeved shirt, black jeans with a wallet chain hanging out, blue sneakers, gold bracers with a green jewel within the center of each, and black, fingerless gloves. Also has a necklace with a strange symbol of a upside down white triangle over an upright black triangle with a 4-point star on it.
POSITIVE
Jack is usually a very nice person, always willing to help lend a hand, is more than open to trying new things, and, above all else, loves trying to make people happy.
NEGATIVE
However, Jack does have a slighty fear of transforming, due to him being afraid that he might lose self control. Along with this, he can be very shy and timid, and doesn't have the greatest self-esteem by any means. He's also usually a pacifist, seeing fighting moreso as a sport than anything.
LIKES
-Reading
-Playing video games
-Exercising (Albeit usually alone)
-Helping people
-Socializing
-Nice people
DISLIKES
-Attention
-Fighting as a solution
-Using his Quirk too much
-Knives
-Needles
-Anything small, hard, and throwable
Personality:
Jack can be briefly described as a very shy and closed off person upon first meeting the short boy. However, if he spends enough time with a person, he’ll quickly start to open up to them and show a much different nature to how he initially appears. He’s a very kind person, always worrying about others before himself, though it's not uncommon for him to worry about others too much and himself not enough. It also isn’t uncommon for him to hide behind people he trusts around people he doesn’t or doesn’t know. He also can tend to ramble on and on without noticing in a conversation but can catch himself before he goes on for too long.
However, this type of personality can be shattered completely when Jack is faced with combat situations and has no other options but to fight. In combat, he is extremely confident in his own abilities and will step up and take charge if no one else is willing. He will do anything within his power to protect both his allies and those in need, though only fully using his Quirk as a last resort, often only changing one body part at a time or using his tail for combat. He’ll even go as far as flat out biting an enemy with his sharp teeth if it meets avoiding having to transform, for fear that his draconic nature will cause him to berserk.
Appearance:
Jack is often seen wearing a white, sleeveless jacket with a furred rim, a red t-shirt, black jeans with a wallet chain hanging out, blue sneakers, gold bracers with a green jewel within the center of each, and black, fingerless gloves. Also has a necklace with a strange symbol of a upside down white triangle over an upright black triangle with a 4-point star on it. He has white, pearly smooth scales all over his body, even on his cheeks and the top of his pointy ears. His teeth are extremely sharp, being like a mix between a normal person's and an alligator. To top it all off, he has a massive, 6-foot-long dragon's tail that is rimmed and tipped with white fur, and wings with a total wingspan of 24 feet (12 feet per wing).
POSITIVE
To say that Jack is nice is an understatement. He was always willing to help out a friend or fellow classmate, whether it be with training or financial situations. He has a big heart and always puts his best foot forward with whatever he sets out to do. He has a strong sense of justice, keeping to the idea of staying on the side of Life above all else.
NEGATIVE
However, Jack does have his downsides. He can get moody rather quickly, and his emotions are easily flared up due to his Quirk. That said, he has a lot of trauma from growing up, and is admittedly much more innocent than most people his age. He has a lot of energy as well, but due to his shy nature, it can be difficult for him to get it out sometimes.
LIKES
-Reading
-Playing video games
-Exercising
-Helping people
-Socializing
-Kindness
-Cuddling/Snuggling
DISLIKES
-Attention
-Fighting as a solution
-Knives
-Needles
-Anything small, hard, and throwable
Personality:
Jack, to put it in layman’s terms, is an ambivert. He is an extremely kind individual, who tries his hardest to do his best not only for himself but for the people around him. He loves to go out and explore, and loves to meet and chat with new people. That being said, he is often internally very shy, and, at least depending on the day or his mood, this shyness can come out in varying capacities. This peaks when he is met with social confrontation, where he will either cower or hide behind someone he trusts, or met with a more passive-aggressive tone in an attempt to fight back. Despite his innocence, he can have quite the mouth on him!
However, this type of personality can be shattered completely when Jack is faced with combat situations and has no other options but to fight. In combat, he is extremely confident in his own abilities and will step up and take charge if no one else is willing. He will do anything within his power to protect both his allies and those in need. Above all of this, his emotions are a bit more dramatic because of his Quirk. As a result, he can be easily excited over the smallest thing, or prideful over even a light amount of disrespect. He is usually very kind and respectful to everyone he meets, unless given a decent reason not to be.
Also going to be spending 200 XP to upgrade Jack's Tiny Dragon ability~ {UPDATING FROM}
The Tiniest of Dragons
Rank: F
Effect: After getting fully adjusted to transforming, Jack stumbled upon a way to transform in a much smaller version of his draconic form. However, he does not get the normal durability and strength buffs that he would normally get. Despite that, along with the fact that this form is very convenient for everyday usage, it can be used for quick dodging, hiding, and sneaking through small spaces. At it's current rank, Jack's size is comparable to that of a husky.
The Tiniest of Dragons
Rank: E
Effect: After getting fully adjusted to transforming, Jack stumbled upon a way to transform in a much smaller version of his draconic form. Along with the fact that this form is very convenient for everyday usage, it can be used for hiding and sneaking through small spaces as well. At it's current rank, Jack's size is comparable to that of a fennec fox.
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Post by Rosey on Apr 13, 2020 10:31:12 GMT -4
Approved!
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Post by Jack Orion on Apr 26, 2020 21:48:16 GMT -4
Buying for 100 XP
Draconic Senses
Rank: F
Effect: After yet another sudden mutation of his Quirk, Jack has found himself with enhanced eyesight, hearing, and smell! At it's current rank, it is slightly above the average human's normal senses.
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Post by Rosey on Apr 28, 2020 5:09:13 GMT -4
Approved, don't forget it's in the F-rank range :) (thats simply included in your ability)
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Post by Jack Orion on Jun 16, 2020 15:59:35 GMT -4
Alright, time for this again~ Firstly, I'd like Jack's 3 EP to be converted into 750 XP! With that, I'd like to make a small upgrade~
Draconic Speed
Rank: D
Effect: After intense training along with his draconic physiology, Jack's overall movement and reaction speed has began to reach speeds above regular human levels. He now has to ability to move at speeds equal to an antelope (60 mph).
Draconic Speed
Rank: C
Effect: After putting his overall body to the test over and over again, Jack has now managed to reach speeds far above the normal human levels. With this, his overall flight and movement speed can reach up to a staggering 90 km/hr! He can contend with some of the fastest animals now!
And, after realizing that I'll have 200 total XP left over, I'm gonna put that to some use and upgrade Jack's enhanced senses~
Draconic Senses
Rank: F
Effect: After yet another sudden mutation of his Quirk, Jack has found himself with enhanced eyesight, hearing, and smell! At its current rank, it is slightly above the average human's normal senses.
Draconic Senses
Rank: E
Effect: After yet another sudden mutation of his Quirk, Jack has found himself with enhanced eyesight, hearing, and smell! At its current rank, it is equal to a dog's overall senses.
And, now, after a bit of discussion with mods, we've come to the decision to limit Jack's Quirk by a fair amount, especially including his size changing.
Type: Transformation
Rank: C
Description: Jack has the ability to change certain body parts or his entire self into the form of a mighty white dragon! With this, any body part he changes, or in the cases of his entire self, is covered in pure white scales that act like armor, along with getting enhanced draconic strength. In his draconic state he is about 23 meters long, 16 meters tall standing up, and 10 meters tall when on all fours. In addition to this, when transformed, Jack has the ability to produce plasma energy that can be used in various ways. This energy does NOT have any elemental advantages, but simply changes color depending on where he is at what time. From most of his body he can fire off spherical plasma orbs or beams capable of damaging hard metal. These can be fired for a maximum of approx. the length of an Olympic swimming pool.
Benefits
C-Rank Strength
-Gives Jack enough power to break through hard metal
C-Rank Durability
-Makes Jack as tough as hard metal
C-Rank Plasma Energy Manipulation
-Allows Jack to coat his body in plasma energy or fire it as he sees fit at a max range of 30 meters
Exhaustion and Weakness: While Jack can freely manipulate how he transforms his body, this comes at a cost. Unlike a full transformation, when Jack only partially transforms, his durability only comes into effect on that specific body part, thus taking the full force of an attack should he be caught off guard or hit in any non-transformed part. Along with this, if he overuses his plasma energy, it will start to inflict a slight exhaustion effect, making it harder for Jack to move and will cause his muscles to pull with strain. Additionally, should Jack become too stressed or emotionally unstable, he will go into a more berserk state, which costs him his clarity of mind and his overall composure, thus making him very reckless. Additionally, Jack has the permanent parts of wings sprouting from his back, much sharper than normal teeth, scales all over his upper and lower body, and his long dragon tail, which is the most sensitive part of his body. This means that, at least outside of combat, the smallest pets and scratches can feel like the best thing in the world, or any accidental hit or tug will feel like absolute torture. Along with this, the Quirk makes him much more emotional and sensitive than the average person, Jack's mind having to battle constantly with fearful instincts and his wanting of attention.
Type: Transformation
Rank: C
Description: Jack has the ability to change certain body parts or his entire self into the form of a mighty white dragon! With this, any body part he changes, or in the cases of his entire self, is covered in pure white scales that act like armor, along with getting enhanced draconic strength. In his draconic state he is about 13 meters long, 8 meters tall standing up, and 3 meters tall when on all fours. His total length in his full dragon form is about 6 meters long. In his regular form, he is 5 feet tall standing up, with his tail being about 6 feet long. Finally, in his tiny dragon form, his total length is about 20 inches, with him being about 10 inches standing up, and his tail being about 10 inches. In addition to this, when transformed, Jack has the ability to breathe a type of plasma energy that can be fired in beams or short bursts. This energy does NOT have any elemental advantages, but simply changes color depending on where he is at what time or his mood that are capable of damaging hard metal. These can be fired for a maximum of approx. the length of an Olympic swimming pool.
Benefits
C-Rank Strength
-Gives Jack enough power to break through hard metal
C-Rank Durability
-Makes Jack as tough as hard metal
C-Rank Plasma Breath
-Allows Jack to fire plasma energy from his mouth at a max range of 30 meters
Exhaustion and Weakness: While Jack can freely manipulate how he transforms his body, this comes at a cost. Unlike a full transformation, when Jack only partially transforms, his durability only comes into effect on that specific body part, thus taking the full force of an attack should he be caught off guard or hit in any non-transformed part. He can also not fully transform in quick succession; once transformed, he can not change again for at least a single post after said transformation. Along with this, if he overuses his plasma energy, it will start to inflict a slight exhaustion effect, making it harder for Jack to move and will cause his muscles to pull with strain. Additionally, should Jack become too stressed or emotionally unstable, he will go into a more berserk state, which costs him his clarity of mind and his overall composure, thus making him very reckless. Additionally, Jack has the permanent parts of wings sprouting from his back, much sharper than normal teeth, scales all over his upper and lower body, and his long dragon tail, which is the most sensitive part of his body. This means that, at least outside of combat, the smallest pets and scratches can feel like the best thing in the world, or any accidental hit or tug will feel like absolute torture. Along with this, the Quirk makes him much more emotional and sensitive than the average person, Jack's mind having to battle constantly with fearful instincts and his wanting of attention.
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Post by quizzity on Jun 19, 2020 18:31:20 GMT -4
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Post by Jack Orion on Jul 26, 2020 21:37:04 GMT -4
Oki, making this more official real fast to save everyone a headache, lmao Sorry for not doing this earlier, just got a bit lazy about it. My apologies for anything that had come of this
Jack is often seen wearing a white, sleeveless jacket with a furred rim, a red t-shirt, black jeans with a wallet chain hanging out, blue sneakers, gold bracers with a green jewel within the center of each, and black, fingerless gloves. Also has a necklace with a strange symbol of a upside down white triangle over an upright black triangle with a 4-point star on it. He has white, pearly smooth scales all over his body, even on his cheeks and the top of his pointy ears. His teeth are extremely sharp, being like a mix between a normal person's and an alligator. To top it all off, he has a massive, 6-foot-long dragon's tail that is rimmed and tipped with white fur, and wings with a total wingspan of 24 feet (12 feet per wing).
Jack is often seen wearing a white, sleeveless jacket with a furred rim, a red t-shirt, black jeans with a wallet chain hanging out, blue sneakers, gold bracers with a green jewel within the center of each, and black, fingerless gloves. Also has a necklace with a strange symbol of a upside down white triangle over an upright black triangle with a 4-point star on it. He has white, pearly smooth scales all over his body, even on his cheeks and the top of his pointy ears. His teeth are extremely sharp, being like a mix between a normal person's and an alligator. He also has a massive, 6-foot-long dragon's tail that is rimmed and tipped with white fur, and wings with a total wingspan of 24 feet (12 feet per wing). To top things all off, he has large, curvy horns sprouting from the top of his head, and a medium-sized 4-sided gem in the middle of his chest. They can change color dependant on his mood, but default to a brilliant azure hue.
Exhaustion and Weakness: While Jack can freely manipulate how he transforms his body, this comes at a cost. Unlike a full transformation, when Jack only partially transforms, his durability only comes into effect on that specific body part, thus taking the full force of an attack should he be caught off guard or hit in any non-transformed part. He can also not fully transform in quick succession; once transformed, he can not change again for at least a single post after said transformation. Along with this, if he overuses his plasma energy, it will start to inflict a slight exhaustion effect, making it harder for Jack to move and will cause his muscles to pull with strain. Additionally, should Jack become too stressed or emotionally unstable, he will go into a more berserk state, which costs him his clarity of mind and his overall composure, thus making him very reckless. Additionally, Jack has the permanent parts of wings sprouting from his back, much sharper than normal teeth, scales all over his upper and lower body, and his long dragon tail, which is the most sensitive part of his body. This means that, at least outside of combat, the smallest pets and scratches can feel like the best thing in the world, or any accidental hit or tug will feel like absolute torture. Along with this, the Quirk makes him much more emotional and sensitive than the average person, Jack's mind having to battle constantly with fearful instincts and his wanting of attention.
Exhaustion and Weakness: While Jack can freely manipulate how he transforms his body, this comes at a cost. Unlike a full transformation, when Jack only partially transforms, his durability only comes into effect on that specific body part, thus taking the full force of an attack should he be caught off guard or hit in any non-transformed part. He can also not fully transform in quick succession; once transformed, he can not change again for at least a single post after said transformation. Along with this, if he overuses his plasma energy, it will start to inflict a slight exhaustion effect, making it harder for Jack to move and will cause his muscles to pull with strain. Additionally, should Jack become too stressed or emotionally unstable, he will go into a more berserk state, which costs him his clarity of mind and his overall composure, thus making him very reckless. Additionally, Jack has the permanent parts of wings sprouting from his back, much sharper than normal teeth, scales all over his upper and lower body, and his long dragon tail, which is the most sensitive part of his body. This means that, at least outside of combat, the smallest pets and scratches can feel like the best thing in the world, or any accidental hit or tug will feel like absolute torture. He also has large horns sprouting from his head, along with a medium-sized gem in the middle of his chest. These are made from a material similar to diamond, though their toughness relates to his Durability rank. They have as much nerve endings as the rest of his body, though shaving them down doesn't hurt him much. Were they to break, it would hurt as much as a bone being broken, though they like the rest of his body heal with time. Along with this, the Quirk makes him much more emotional and sensitive than the average person, Jack's mind having to battle constantly with fearful instincts and his wanting of attention.
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Post by Pilo on Jul 28, 2020 0:33:33 GMT -4
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Post by Jack Orion on Jan 12, 2021 12:00:11 GMT -4
Ok, now that I finally have enough here...time to have some combat fun. I'll be converting my 1 EP into 250 XP, and spending 1,100 XP to up Jack's Martial Arts ability from E Rank all the way up to C Rank!
Martial Arts
Rank: E
Effect: Jack has more advanced knowledge in multiple classes of martial arts, and knows how to utilize them in both normal and dragons forms.
Draconic Combat
Rank: C
Effect: After pushing his limits time and time again both in combat and in training, Jack has a natural knack for combat in all forms, utilizing forms of martial arts while taking advantage of his wings and tail for blocking and attacking. Along with his knowledge of claw-based combat and use of atomic breath, he is a force to be reckoned with in a fight, spar or serious.
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Post by Axeldin on Jan 13, 2021 20:23:52 GMT -4
oh look its done =D
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